Nice flying sir! The edit wasnt bad either. Everyone has different styles to editing so not much to complain or mention in yours.
I like to use gaps to transition between different video elements instead of fades. Also, If you can time the vid and transitions with the music its kinda cool as the kwad seems to "dance" to the music. But this is just my flavor.
Keep up the great work and keep sharing those vids here. btw, there's a specific "Photos and Videos" DRP forum that may get you more views. ?